This was incredible - one of the most masterful uses of Twine I've ever come across. I particularly loved how many of the hyperlinks made me move a few words back as I was reading - forcing me to retread old ground just as Ines is doing. The backgrounds are beautiful, the prose is delightfully unsettling, and the experience was a horrifying treat. Thank you so much for making this.
Stories like this usually aren't my cup of tea, but this one truly was something else! It's well-written, intriguing, and frankly quite creepy at times. Excellent work!
This was amazing. As someone who has suffered the death of a sibling and has a complicated relationship with his family, I connect to some of this personally. Writing was amazing, very interesting it's been awhile since a piece of interactive fiction has been so well done and as entertaining as this. Several points I was brought to literal tears.
This game is so genuinely gorgeous. The emotions it presents and instills are so palpable that I was holding my breath playing it. insane story and writing, so cool
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This was incredible - one of the most masterful uses of Twine I've ever come across. I particularly loved how many of the hyperlinks made me move a few words back as I was reading - forcing me to retread old ground just as Ines is doing. The backgrounds are beautiful, the prose is delightfully unsettling, and the experience was a horrifying treat. Thank you so much for making this.
Damn, that was chilling. Well done, thanks for creating this and sharing.
Stories like this usually aren't my cup of tea, but this one truly was something else! It's well-written, intriguing, and frankly quite creepy at times. Excellent work!
thank you!!
This was amazing.
both the prose & art was so beautiful
THIS WAS SO SICK. I love the word you used to describe things, if that makes since.
This was amazing. As someone who has suffered the death of a sibling and has a complicated relationship with his family, I connect to some of this personally. Writing was amazing, very interesting it's been awhile since a piece of interactive fiction has been so well done and as entertaining as this. Several points I was brought to literal tears.
i'm so happy it resonated! as somebody who's been in a similar position, nothing but love to you <3
holy SHIT this is good. the art. the details the slow creeping horror once you realise what the brother has done what you're about to do and
god. the church the art the way things loop it's just
really good. like really, really good.
This game is so genuinely gorgeous. The emotions it presents and instills are so palpable that I was holding my breath playing it. insane story and writing, so cool